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Post by eliar on Dec 22, 2006 16:33:43 GMT 8
REALY I DONT KNOW THAT KIAN IS ROMANTIC...I KNOW HEM HE IS SO G.G.S.AND ALSO .F.THATS ALL
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Post by Jay on Dec 23, 2006 21:40:56 GMT 8
aww...yup...he seems like the romantic kind tho. tehehe
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Post by Jay on Dec 23, 2006 21:41:55 GMT 8
Twelve
“I wonder how the proposal got along,” Mandy stated, her insides jittering.
“Hey…relax. It’s Egan who should feel jittery, not you,” Gillian laughed. Mark nodded.
“I dunno…I just hope Egan will pull it off, that’s all.”
“I think he will,” Shane responded confidently from the couch, his eyes never leaving the TV set.
“I hope you’re right, Shay,” Mands answered back and took a seat beside him.
*****
“What…” Jodi started. “Is the meaning of all this?”
Kian’s smile faltered a bit. “I want you to marry me.”
“That wedding planner…?”
“Is for our wedding. I had it all prepared…my side, mostly…and I envisioned that-…”
“Kian Egan! You despicable jerk!” Jodi raged, throwing her purse onto the ground. She was really fuming now.
Kian just kept quiet and closed the box. And stood up, slowly, taking his place back on the bench.
“You act like as if I would positively accept your proposal! You are one hell of a person, Egan! Do you really think I would accept your proposal?!” Jodi almost yelled, but restrained herself because there seem to be other couples who were there to enjoy the scenery as well.
Kian just gave her a satisfied smug. “I do.”
“YOU!!!” She marched towards the grinning man and almost wanted to weep in happiness. “Oh god Ki…” she slumped into the seat beside it, her head in her hands. “Why did you do all that? Do you really think I would accept your proposal?” she repeated herself, still not believing that the love of her life was actually proposing to her after he made wedding plans. The cheek of it!
“Yes.” His answer was confident. Kian took her hand in his. “I want nothing else but you Jods. I really, really love you and I want to spend the rest of my life with you. Hell, if you don’t like the wedding that was pre-planned out, I can get a new wedding planner for you…or maybe-…” but he was cut off by the soft pressure of her lips on his.
“There’s nothing I want more than you, Ki. Yes,” Jodi smiled through her tears while resting her head on his shoulder.
“To what? The proposal or the pre-wedding plans?”
“Both.”
*****
“Ah well, Kate…thanks for the meal,” Mark grinned, rubbing his stomach in fulfilment. Kate just didn’t say anything. She kept quiet, her head down. “Kate? Are you alright?”
“Uh? Yeah…I’m fine. I’m sorry Mark,” Kate apologised.
“It seems like you’ve…spaced out just now,” Mark frowned, taking Kate’s hand.
Kate just shook her head in denial. “I’m fine. I swear.” On a lighter note, she continued, “It was nice having dinner with you,” she grinned, trying her hardest to push away the thoughts that were now forming in her head.
nuts. Now what? She thought silently to herself. “Uhh…anyway, it’s getting late, Feehily. I’d better make a move now,” she caught herself staring into those deep blue eyes of his and felt her breath catch. d**n those blue eyes of his, she swore, and bit her lip.
Mark felt the tension in the air as he shifted uncomfortably on his feet. “Uhh. Yeah. It’s getting late,” he repeated her, “I think I’d better send you home,”
“No!” she said almost to quickly, “I mean…that’s alright. I’ll manage by myself, thanks. Nice dinner though,” she answered and stuffed her hands in the pockets of her sweatshirt. And walked away quickly before she did anything she regretted.
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Post by Jay on Dec 23, 2006 21:43:06 GMT 8
hmm...i think I'll give all of ye a chrissy treat...MORE!! Thirteen Kate Harrison thrashed around in her bed that night, not able to erase away the night’s incident. That was the first ever time she ever had a proper dinner with her ‘fake’ boyfriend. That incredibly gorgeous, hot-blooded ‘fake’ boyfriend by the name of Mark Feehily. “d**n you Feehily,” Kate sighed, trying to ignore the knots that were forming in her stomach just by thinking about him. She recalled what Shane had said to her: “Are you sure you’re up for this?” Shane challenged her one day. Kate nodded confidently.
“I mean…he’s not that gorgeous until I find myself falling in love with him…right?”
“Are you really sure?” Shane raised his eyebrow.
“Oh god Shane. Do you want me to be his fake girlfriend or not?”
“All right then. But…on one condition.” Shane crossed his arms.
“All right,” she huffed. “And what is the condition?”
“You’re not allowed to fall in love with him.”
“Just that? Nothing else?” she asked incredulously.
“Nope. Just this one condition. Can you keep your promise not to break it?”
“Yes, Mr Filan sir,” she mocked him and saluted.But it was too late, Kate realised, looking up at the ceiling. I’ve already broken the promise. With a sigh, she got up, picked up the phone, and dialled Shane’s number, hoping he would pick up.
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Post by Chel on Dec 23, 2006 21:51:24 GMT 8
gaaaaah!! 1) i really thought Jodi was declining his proposal. ahaha! she's crazy if she didnt. 2) uh-oh.. kate's in the pic now. great!
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Post by Jay on Dec 25, 2006 14:41:57 GMT 8
weeeeeee! i love entertaining you chel!
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Post by eliar on Dec 25, 2006 16:40:24 GMT 8
me 2 i have an repply u in my site so hope 2 see me someday^_^chel u meke me feel crazy when i was chating in you im not jokeng
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Post by Jay on Dec 26, 2006 22:43:55 GMT 8
woo....chel's capable of 'crazying' people...
BUT NOT ME!!
hahaaha!!
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Post by Chel on Dec 26, 2006 22:55:23 GMT 8
me 2 i have an repply u in my site so hope 2 see me someday^_^chel u meke me feel crazy when i was chating in you im not jokeng eep!!! crazy??!!?! is that a bad thing??? weeeeeee! i love entertaining you chel! coz i looove ur fic!! hahaha!! ^_^
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Post by Jay on Dec 26, 2006 23:05:55 GMT 8
ha....the last part of my fic!!
Fourteen
“And why do you drag me here, in the middle of this godforsaken night, for goodness knows what?” Shane swore, sitting down on the park bench.
“I just needed a friend to talk to, that’s all,” Kate responded timidly, sitting beside him. She still couldn’t get Mark out of her mind no matter how hard she tried.
“Hey…” Shane instantly regretted using the tone he used a while ago after looking at his wife’s friend. She looked utterly miserable. He wondered why. “Is it Mark?”
Her face contorted. “Bingo,” Shane whispered under his breath. “So…what happened between you and him?”
“Nothing.”
“Hey, c’mon, you didn’t drag me all the way here just to tell me nothing had been going on between the two of ya,”
“Fine,” she huffed. “I had dinner with him.”
“Okay…” Shane didn’t find any fault in this. “And what happened then?”
“He thanked me for the meal, I thanked him for the company and I left.”
“Uh wait. Why the sudden aloofness?”
“Let’s just say I’m scared of what I’m feeling for him right now.”
Shane took some time to process the information in his head. “Wait…you mean…”
“I broke your promise Shay, I’m sorry.” She rose, rubbed her nose a while and looked back at him. “I’m so sorry,” her voice broke, tears threatening to spill from her eyes. And she walked away from him without even looking back.
Shane let out a loud groan. “Oh god, Mark. Now look what you’ve done!!!” he buried his head in his hands. “And who’s gonna fall for you next, mate? Julia Roberts?!” he grumbled to himself, and swore ripely. “This is never gonna end,” he muttered, running his hand through his hair.
-Look out for part 2!!!-
PS: To my readers, sorry for abruptingly disturbing your reading…because I’ve a job now, so I have to space my time out to write out this fanfic… For those who’d wish to have a recap, I’d gladly type it out for ya:
Mands and Nicky had a rocky marriage, because of Amy (cuz Amy’s preggie with Nicky’s child) and Nicky met with an accident when he was on his way to Amy’s house.
Mark came back from USA, old feelings between Mands and Mark blossomed when they went for a holiday around the world. Mark is still unsure of what Mands felt towards him.
Mark decided to get a fake girlfriend to make Mands jealous. To his horror, Mands was alright with him having a girlfriend even though she felt jealous (on the inside). Kate, Mark’s fake girlfriend, fell in love with him after a while. (headache huh?)
Kian had a wedding planner to plan his and Jodi’s wedding. He proposed to Jodi and she accepted.
I’m really, really sorry cuz I’ve not a lot of inspiration right now! And of course, I need time to write out my story…
So…what’s gonna happen to Mark, Mands and Kate? Will Mark find out the truth about Kate’s feelings for him? Will Mands realise her love for Mark? Who will Mark choose, Mands or Kate, if, given a choice?
And what will happen to Amy? Is the baby Nicky’s or her husband’s? What’s gonna happen when the baby’s born?
All I can say is that there will be sacrifices that will have to be made in Part 2…and more complications will arise…
So I guess I’ll leave you to wallow in misery (hopefully not for long!) while I finish my story then!
Jays. xXx
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Post by Chel on Dec 26, 2006 23:18:01 GMT 8
*wipes tears* oh jaays!!! now that i've read the final part, i think i need sumthing to distract me from thinking bout this fic!!!! wanna know.. wanna know... wanna know.... oh well... gud luck jays for ur job.. hehhee... ^_^ thanks for writing the fic!!!
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Post by Jay on Dec 26, 2006 23:59:00 GMT 8
awww poor chel!
don't worry the fic will be up soon...part 2 coming up!
and thanks!
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Post by eliar on Dec 27, 2006 10:35:04 GMT 8
T_TTTTTTTTTTT_TT_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T tahts not a bad word or thing ....4 me the meaning of that is.....i just look a people who appreciate me all the time...T_T
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Post by Chel on Dec 27, 2006 21:49:56 GMT 8
T_TTTTTTTTTTT_TT_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T_T tahts not a bad word or thing ....4 me the meaning of that is.....i just look a people who appreciate me all the time...T_T aww.. now i feel special... teehee!! ^_^ awww poor chel! don't worry the fic will be up soon...part 2 coming up! and thanks! yahoooo!! ^_^ *sings* i'm so excited!! and i cant hide it!! really cool.. ^_^
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Post by eliar on Dec 29, 2006 16:02:29 GMT 8
hm.....mmm...what did you think,,,,,,,if i found someone who appreciate me ....what i am doing...4 me she/he is special
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